Monday, February 11, 2008

itanii mudat baad mile ho

itanii mudat baad mile ho

itanii mudat baad mile ho
kin sochon mein gum rahate ho

tez hava ne mujh se pucha
ret pe kya likhate rahate ho

kaun sii baat hai tum mein aisii
itane achche kyon lagate ho

ham se na pucho hijr ke qisse
apanii kaho ab tum kaise ho

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

aa.
i am genuinely impressed.

really impressed.

apanii kaho ab tum kaise ho.

keep it up.

yaddain said...

hijar aur newyork ?
zara num ho to yeh mati(pakistani) bari zarkheez ha saqi

Anonymous said...

really interesting poetry. keep it up..

Faani said...

Buhat hi khoob andaze bayaa'n he kya kahiyay
Alfaz mai nafasat he soch mai geharai kya kahiayay

r i Z said...

udaas raton main
chaand ki chaandni main
tanha jab
dil roay tu
aisay main
tumharee ik muskurahat ki yaad bhi
qatra-e-zist lagti hay jana

Muji_fast said...

AOA, Nice poetry and nice rhythm in it so wat's with the pic rights? ok nice smile n dimples see ya later... Allah Haffiz

Ammar said...

WOW...NICE POETRY...AND NICE SMILE....KEEP IT UP

Anonymous said...

Well its always nice with MOHSIN NAQVI's poetry.

Good work to spread it !