Saturday, March 1, 2008

Zikr-e-shab-e-feeraaq se wehshat usse bhi thi,

Zikr-e-shab-e-feeraaq se wehshat usse bhi thi,

Zikr-e-shab-e-feeraaq se wehshat usse bhi thi,
Meri tarah kisi se mohabbat usse bhi thi.
Mujh ko bhi shauq tha naye chehron ke deed ka,
Raastya badal ke chalne ki aadat usse bhi thi.
Sunata tha wo bhi sab ko puraani kahaniyan,
Taza rafaqaton ki zaroorat usse bhi thi.
Mujh se bichhad ke shehar mein ghul mil gaya wo shaks,
Halaan ke shehar bhar se raqaabat usse bhi thi.
Wo mujhse badh ke zabt ka aadi tha,jee gaya,
Warna har ek saans qayaamat usse bhi thi.
Aaye dil na jaan khud ko nakaam ke bad-zauq,
Wo mana nahi par mujhse mohabbat usse bhi thi

18 comments:

Anonymous said...

aa.
wow zabardust.excellent.marvellous
good job ,keep it up.

f.rafiq2005 said...

hi, i love your blog so much. keep it up.

Anonymous said...

it is beautiful and fantastic

Anonymous said...

Wah WAh Wah....Yaar Kay Baat Hey Aap Ki Boht Achi poetrey hai aap ki i Like It....Aap Key Kay Baat Hai...Boht Koob
Aap Key Tarfe MEin Kay Kahon???"^~^"

Anonymous said...

Asslam O Alaikum

I am little bit religious, so I would like to appreciate only innocence of your face ......

Your Sister ....

Muhammad Shakir Aziz said...

Its a nice effort. It would be more nicer if you wrote it in Urdu. Writing Urdu in English is sin with it. I recommend you to visit www.urduweb.org/mehfil for help to write blog in Urdu. Otherwise write it in pure English as other Pakistanies do for money on internet.
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Best Regards
Shakir

Anonymous said...

Dil o dimagh mey ek ajeeb si khamoshi bhar gaye yeh nazm..deep
aur bahut bahut achi hey

Anonymous said...

Hi i just want to say that
i like the way u think
i like these comment on u
u r really so cute
Great job
ALLAH app ko kamyaab kary INSHALLAH

Rashid said...

aoa


zabardast lyrincs bahut acha hain ap apna contach number do gi plz ur poetry is great thanks

ifthikhar said...

excellent i like it

DIl Jee said...

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Vist Kerna I Hope App Ko Pasand Aye Ge:)
Your Wellwisher
ADIL KIANI (Dil Jee)

DIl Jee said...

Sallam.. Wow Yaar... App Ka Blog To Bohat he Acha Hay.. Hmm Me Really Like It.. But Aik Comment Dunga AGer App Etni Mehnat Kerti Hian To Kesi Free WebHosting Mia He Apni Web Design Ker Lain Jesay Ka Miane Ki Hui Hay: www.dil-zone.co.nr
Vist Kerna I Hope App Ko Pasand Aye Ge:)
Wellwisher ADIL KIANI (Dil Jee)

adil said...

Sallam.. Wow Yaar... App Ka Blog To Bohat he Acha Hay.. Hmm Me Really Like It.. But Aik Comment Dunga AGer App Etni Mehnat Kerti Hian To Kesi Free WebHosting Mia He Apni Web Design Ker Lain Jesay Ka Miane Ki Hui Hay: www.dil-zone.co.nr
Vist Kerna I Hope App Ko Pasand Aye Ge:)
Wellwisher ADIL KIANI (Dil Jee)

Anonymous said...

Salam
it was a nice complicated poem, so keep it up sis

Sidra Maqsood said...

THanx for you so many comment. i really appreciate it.

regards
Sidra

Irshad Ali said...

Good very good nice job.It's really appreciable.Nice to know that u live in New york and still love Pakistan.
Wish you Best of Luck for future.

Abdul said...

Assala-O-Alikum. AAP KA BLOGG dakha bahut pasand ayay. East sy door west mein, Daes sy door perdaes mein apny mulk ki yaad aur us sy jury saqafat phir apni madri zuban mein hi apna adab zinda rakhna yeh waqee watan sy muhabbat aur zinda dily ka saboot hai. aap ki is kawish mein bahut sarahoonga. Ghazal ka intikhab bhrr bahut khoob hai.khud bhee likhny ki koshish kareen yeh acha hooga. agar inpage ( urdu software ) mein mein type ker k jpeg mein convert ker k rakhdeen to kaheen bhe aur kisy bhee site sy her web explore l mein dekha ja sukta hai, is sy soony py suhaga yeh hoojay ga keh urdu zooq urdu fonts mein perhny waloon ko mil jay ga.
Mein aap ki is koshish ko 1 murtaba phir sarahoonga, Please is ko jaree rakhna

Aly said...

Anaa ki qaid se niklay muqabla to karay
Wo mera sath nibhanay ka hosla to karay
Kabhi na tootnay wala hisaar ban jaoon
WO MERI ZAAT MEIN REHNAY KA FAISLA TO KARAY..